Girl Under Glass #10: Worthless Word — Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome back, Sixers. August was a good release month for Girl Under Glass, and sales exceeded my goal. My thanks to those of you who’ve bought the book; I do hope you enjoy(ed) the read. :D

Today’s Six Sentence Sunday post continues Rachel’s gunpoint confrontation with the alien soldier. (Last week that soldier learned that Rachel’s dogs, Jack and Audie, are as suspicious of his intentions as Rachel is.)

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He grimaced and shifted, and I glanced at his right leg. Mud and blood caked his fatigues from the knee down. It had thundered and blustered all night, and I didn’t envy this man being caught in the storm.

“I’m not here to harm you,” he said. “You have my word.”

“Which isn’t worth shit.”

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She’s not giving him an inch. Not yet anyway.

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As always, I recommend a trip to the Six Sentence Sunday website to get the list of writers participating in this week’s hop.

The Next Best Thing Challenge: Girl Under Glass

I was tagged by author Jessica Subject to do The Next Best Thing Challenge.  Thanks for thinking of me, Jessica!

Here’s how it works:

  • Answer the 10 questions below
  • Spread the fun and tag other writers to participate.

1. What is the title of your book / WIP?

My book is titled, Girl Under Glass, and it is the first novel in a planned three-book series.

2. Where did the idea for this book come from?

A brain-storming session with my mom. We were playing What if?

What if a woman lived in a rural area and a stranger appeared in her yard? What if Earth had been conquered by aliens? What if she was a part of an experiment, but didn’t know it?

3. What genre would your book fall under?

Science fiction, specifically romantic dystopian sci-fi.

4. Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?

Dwayne Johnson would be cast as Ehtishem.

Jessica Valentine (my cover model) would play Rachel.

Rachel’s daughter, Pearl, would be played by Nikki Hahn.

5. What is the one sentence synopsis of your book?

To protect her young daughter from a madman and a tyrant, Rachel Pryne must trust an enemy – one of the alien warriors who conquered Earth.

6. Is your book published or represented?

It’ll be self-published.

7. How long did it take you to write it?

All in, about 18 months. I vetted it with my critique group and multiple beta readers, and then hired a copy editor to comb through it. After which I made more editorial changes.

Hey, I like to be thorough.

8. What other books in your genre would you compare it to?

Generally, I don’t make comparisons, but one reviewer described it as The Scarlet Letter meets Star Trek, which I think is very apropos.

9. Which authors inspired you to write this book?

I was more inspired by the strong female characters I’ve read and seen: Ripley, Sarah Connor, Jane Eyre, Lessa of Pern, etc.

10. Tell us anything else that might pique our interest in your book.

Girl Under Glass was a 2012 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Semi-finalist manuscript.

“…a compellingly bumpy ride of a love story….”–Publishers Weekly* Reviewer, ABNA Semi-finals

It is 2032, the Ohnenrai – Earth’s humanoid alien conquerors – orbit the planet, and Terran reproduction is failing. Rachel Pryne, a trained medic, is struggling to protect her seven-year-old daughter, Pearl, from the sexual predation of their community’s leader, Elder Cyrus. Having fathered the girl by rape, Cyrus now intends to take her on her eighth birthday, only six weeks away.

Then Rachel finds her unlikely champion – an injured Ohnenrai soldier who appears in her yard one stormy evening. She knows she may be choosing death over the devil in trusting this warrior, but she doesn’t know that her trust, and her DNA, will make her one of the most important and endangered people to ever set foot aboard an Ohnenrai starship.

Equal parts pastoral and military science fiction, Girl Under Glass moves from a post-apocalyptic wilderness in the American Pacific Northwest to a high-tech world aboard an alien starship furnished with all the stolen comforts of Earth.

This book introduces Rachel Pryne, a trained medic whose parents’ lifelong and life-ending connection to the Ohnenrai set her upon a path she never wanted. Readers also meet Ehtishem, an Ohnenrai soldier who exists to save his dying people, but who faces enemies from within and without his own military. While the only possible solution to his people’s extinction lies in convincing Rachel to help him save them, all she wants is to protect her daughter and see the Ohnenrai go straight to hell.

*Publishers Weekly is an independent organization unassociated with Amazon and Penguin Group (USA). This review was based on a draft version of this manuscript and not the final published manuscript.

And now, the five talented authors I’m tagging to share the fun.

Melanie R. Golden

K.E. Saxon

Carrie Crain

Goran Zidar

Kylie Scott

Six Sentence Sunday: Girl Under Glass #1 — The First Sign of Trouble

Hello, friends, and welcome back for another Six Sentence Sunday. I’m gonna take a little break from First Comes Famine to introduce (or re-introduce for some of you) Girl Under Glass. This book is romantic dystopian/sci-fi and will be released this month. It is a 2012 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award semi-finalist, and you can read its blurb here.

So, starting from the beginning, I’d like you to meet Terran medic, Rachel Pryne, her seven-year-old daughter, Pearl, and their dogs, Jack and Audie:

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The dogs growled.

I glanced to where they sat beside the fireplace with their heads lifted and ears pricked. “Jack, Audie, what is it?” Listening, I heard only rain drumming on our metal roof, so I shrugged and turned back to the stove. Plucking a scalpel from the boiling water with tongs, I placed it in the sterile box and blinked steam from my eyes as I chased a needle around the pot. “Dang it.”

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Now that you’ve read this, please take a moment to visit the official Six Sentence Sunday site for links to more awesome sixes.

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The ABNA: Crashing, crashing! Always crashing!

My friend, Annie, traveled throughout East Asia during the early 80s, and this was her experience when leaving one of the Indonesian islands.

As she arrived at the airport, Annie’s attention was drawn to the dense jungle at the end of the runway. The tail of a rather large passenger plane was jutting up through the trees at an unnatural angle. The rest of the plane was hidden by greenery. When Annie checked in, she asked the woman at the ticketing counter about the unfortunate plane. The woman responded, “Oh, yes, planes. Crashing, crashing! Always crashing!” Then she gave my friend a brilliant smile and a boarding pass.

What does this have to do with the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award? Not much. I just think it’s a funny story.

Girl Under Glass didn’t move into the ABNA final round. And, really, I didn’t expect it to. But I’m damn proud to have made it into the semi-finals; it’s no small accomplishment. And the current draft is much tighter than what I submitted to the ABNA. So what I won from the contest is the confidence of knowing that I can spin a pretty fine tale according to a group of strangers. And you can bet I’ll be sticking 2012 ABNA Semi-Finalist all over my marketing materials.

Writing, I suppose, is like flying in Indonesia in the early 80s. Books go crashing, crashing, always crashing. Yet, we smile, take our boarding pass, and climb aboard for another wild ride. I wonder where I’ll go next….

We Interrupt Our Regularly Scheduled Six Sentence Sunday…

…to brag. I know, it’s not very attractive, but dammit, every once in a while something happens that’s worthy of a little chest puffery.

You guys, my romantic sci-fi novel, Girl Under Glass, just advanced into the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award‘s semi-finals! :D

So I hope you’ll indulge me with six sentences from that book this week. I promise we’ll rejoin Bartholomew next week. (Pinky swear.) And, because I know how much you like heroic characters, here’s a snippet featuring my hero, Ehtishem.

In this scene, Cyrus had punched Rachel and was choking her when Ehtishem pulled him off her. This is why you don’t want to piss off Ehtishem.

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Ehtishem ignored the gathering audience as he leaned over Cyrus. “This is for knifing me in the back, coward.” He cocked his fist and snapped it into the prone man’s fogged mask. The mask cracked, Cyrus shouted, and blood replaced fog. “And this is for torturing Rachel.” His kick left Cyrus holding his crotch and howling.

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Cyrus so deserved that.

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Please take a moment to visit the official Six Sentence Sunday website. There are lots of other writers–published and unpublished–awaiting your feedback.

Girl Under Glass and the 2012 ABNA

Rachel Pryne
(photo: ByteStudio Photography; model: Jessica Valentine)

So, on a whim, I threw Girl Under Glass into this year’s Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award competition.

For those of you unfamiliar with this contest, they accept 5,000 entries in General Fiction and 5,000 in Young Adult Fiction. There are multiple judging steps whereby they cull those 10,000 down to six (three in each category) and then pick winners. Right now it’s in the semifinalist step, which means that both categories went from 5,000 to 50.

And, you guessed it, Girl Under Glass is one of those 50. Four other sci-fi novels made that cut.

Um, that’s the top 1% of General Fiction entries.

Da-ang.

(‘Scuse me whilst I wipe the sh*t-eatin’ grin off my face.)