Six Sentence Sunday: Flight #5

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From Scorsese's Gangs of New York

Welcome back, Sixers! Sorry I failed to post more from Flight on the 18th; life intruded on art, and I missed Six Sentence Sunday. Some of you stopped by and left comments anyway, and I so appreciate your kind words.

Because you’ve so patiently waited to find out what the Catcher wants our hero to see, I’m skipping ahead a few paragraphs. We now join Bartholomew on the roof of the brick tenement where the crows are gazing down at the Five Points — New York’s Sixth Ward.

(If you’re new to this story, and want to read more, the posts begin here.)

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Bartholomew followed their gaze and spied a small figure flitting between horse carts, tradesmen, and sluggards. A small girl, her blonde braids flying and blue shawl clutched to her chest, was sprinting his way with an older girl and two boys in pursuit. He crouched at the ledge, dragged on his cigarette, and watched with keen, unblinking eyes.

With her pursuers gaining ground, the urchin was rerouted by an overturned market cart. She ducked between two men and scuttled around the corner into the dead-end alley below Bartholomew. She ran to a door at the rear of the building and yanked on its handle, but it didn’t give. With a little shriek and a kick to the door, she whirled, and found her escape had been blocked.

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Six Sentence Sunday: Flight #4

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Art by Richard Tetrault/http://richard-tetrault.blogspot.com/

Hello lovely Sixers. For today’s post, I done brung ya more from my short story, Flight. In case this is your first installment, you can find the beginning here and read forward. And, when you’re done, check out  Six Sentence Sunday for more sixes.

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The crows reappeared one, two, and three-by-three along Bartholomew’s path then winged up as one massive murder, wheeled about, and disappeared into a narrow alley. He frowned and, stepping into the dank corridor, saw only broken bricks, crumpled paper, and stagnant water until he followed the rustle of wings. The black sentinels stared down from the ledge of a four-story brick tenement. Bartholomew’s frown deepened. But he knew not to ignore the birds. Crows were the Catcher’s inhuman eyes, and there was something she wanted him to see.

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Six Sentence Sunday: Flight #3 ‘One Who Is Bound’

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Welcome back Sixers,

I’m still playing with Flight. So how’s about we continue to follow Monsieur Pelletier as he strolls and mulls?

(A caveat on the following picture. My story takes place in the 1840s, approx. 60 years earlier than this photo. So Bartholomew’s style of dress is Victorian and the streets were certainly rougher than what you see here. Still, you gotta love this pic.)

Mulberry Street, NYC, c1900

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“You look like a gentleman who appreciates fine tobacco, sir.”

Indeed Bartholomew was one to appreciate the finer, and coarser, activities the Five Points offered – he’d already been entertained by one of its ladies this evening. But with a glance he assessed the rickety shop for a charlatan’s abode and strolled onward.

Asir – celui qui est attaché. Bartholomew’s jaw tightened. ‘Asir’ meant he was bound, powerless, a queen’s possession.

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Six Sentence Sunday: Flight 2

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Welcome back for Six Sentence Sunday.

Since last week’s post from my short story, Flight, went over well, I figured I’d post a little more of Bartholomew’s tale. This is a direct follow from that last paragraph. (A reminder that an asir is a demi-daemon.)

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“I have some lovely calico for your lady, sir.”

He knew the crows haunted him for a reason. Lydia – the Catcher and his dead first queen – had kept them as pets. She’d called them reminders, but wouldn’t say of what. So he’d asked Yldiz.

The Beacon had answered, “Ruhun gechit, soul’s passage, asir.”

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Six Sentence Sunday: Flight

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Hello, Sixers, I missed you last week, but went knee-deep in Girl Under Glass and finished my tension edit! Now the book is off to the first of my beta readers, and I’m wandering the room like a five-year-old with too many choices.

So today’s Six Sentence Sunday selection is the opening of a short story called Flight. This is a character exercise and focuses on Bartholomew, my asir (demi-daemon) from Fall for Me.

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Caught in a maelstrom of black feathers and beady eyes, Bartholomew tugged down his top hat and turned up his coat collar to the crows’ sharp talons and beaks. He ducked the raucous beasts and continued along the muddy Mulberry Bend anticipating night’s more interesting fare as the shops and traders closed, packed, and bargained.

“A fat duck for your dinner tonight, sir?”

Whenever he came to New York, he spent as much time as possible in the city’s infamous Sixth Ward knowing Claire found its poverty pathetic. His queen’s reluctance to follow provided him some small measure of freedom. And so Bartholomew had a strange affection for the Bend’s wretches and crooks.

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Six Sentence Sunday: Misogynistic Bastard

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Welcome back to another Six Sentence Sunday installment. The tension edit on Girl Under Glass is almost complete and I’m feeling good about the book. (Of course, I’m also sleep deprived, so this could all be an hallucination. Oh, look! Pink elephants!)

The following conversation between Rachel and her daughter follows the death of a friend in childbirth; the woman’s husband, Michael, is to blame.

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“Why didn’t Michael send Adam sooner?”

Because he’s an evil, misogynistic bastard who deserves to have his testicles diced. “I don’t know, Pearl, I really don’t know.”

“Didn’t he love her?

We passed through the gate and I shivered; I’d forgotten my shawl in Mary’s room. “No, I don’t think he did.”

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Six Sentence Sunday: Desperation

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Hot Coals by Brian Inscore

Welcome back, Sixers. I missed you! I spent last week at SiWC in B.C. and am doing a final micro-tension edit on Girl Under Glass for the next few weeks, so I may be MIA some Sundays.

This is the end of the conversation I’ve been posting over the past month. Rachel and Ehtishem discussing his people’s presence on Earth.

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“Because only desperate people would bring their same suffering to others,” I said.

“We were not always this way. But, yes, now we’re broken and desperate.” Ehtishem Zain laid back on the cot, his hands behind his head, and stared at the ceiling. “Desperation spawns mistakes.”

I folded my knees to my chest, rested my cheek on them, and watched the slow pulse of the glowing coals.

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